I see the star gaze through the sky
Waiting until I see the beauty throughout it
Watching it shimmer in the dark sky
Showing off its brightness until it dies.
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I am sharing my writing to get feedback on my scribbles so that I can improve my writing skills. Please be kind on your comments as I am kid who is trying to develop his writing skills. You can be critical on my writing- but, please provide constructive criticism so that I can learn from you. Thanks
A budding poet
ReplyDeleteNoice work Adi keep doing your poems! :D I think they're all awesome, and I really like this Star one. Have a gud day Adi! :D
ReplyDeleteFrom a potato >:3 (Hannah)