A burning ball of heat
Flaming like Vulcan
Shooting flares
At the earth as if it's all a game
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I am sharing my writing to get feedback on my scribbles so that I can improve my writing skills. Please be kind on your comments as I am kid who is trying to develop his writing skills. You can be critical on my writing- but, please provide constructive criticism so that I can learn from you. Thanks
Brilliant !!! Keep on scribbling . U have the genes of your muthassan
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